Mudcat Café message #955723 The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #59834   Message #955723
Posted By: Doug_Remley
19-May-03 - 06:02 PM
Thread Name: BS: Pronoia - waking up HOPE -new state of mind!
Subject: RE: BS: Pronoia - waking up HOPE -new state of mind!
"Pronoia?" I am bothered with the admixture of the first "column," and one that appears later. Mostly, I like it very much and feel its flow needs more structural editing. It seems the best parts are spoken sentances but that is the kind of poetry I like.

I've never heard of this person, is there more for comparison? Thank you, Kat, for something out of the blue that has such rich thoughts.

Doug :)