Mudcat Café message #3486646 The Mudcat Café TM
Thread #10718   Message #3486646
Posted By: GUEST,Pancho and Lefty
05-Mar-13 - 12:21 PM
Thread Name: WORST single lines
Subject: RE: WORST single lines
How about the Towne's VanZant line in "Pancho and Lefty":
"He wore his gun outside his pants for all the honest world to feel"
...why not use "fear" instead of "feel" - just creepy