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Thread #65758   Message #1085512
Posted By: GUEST,Chongo Chimp
03-Jan-04 - 06:48 PM
Thread Name: BS: On the cowardly nature of GUEST postings
Subject: RE: BS: On the cowardly nature of GUEST postings
I gotta admire your vocabulary, Bub, but I still say you need to brush up on the poetry technique. For instance, it's bad form to end the last 2 lines in a poem with the same word..."enjoy". A 5th Grader would know that. You gotta come up with a different word for one of them lines...like "toy" or "boy" or "ploy".

Here's my suggestion:

But cynics are stupid to those who employ
The fine eye of cupid, which all may enjoy!

Betcha didn't think I had it in me, didja? Also, "impeccable" has two "C"'s. Just the the good old USA, only they're in the middle instead of one on each side.

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