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Doug_Remley BS: Pronoia - waking up HOPE -new state of mind! (9) RE: BS: Pronoia - waking up HOPE -new state of mind! 19 May 03


"Pronoia?" I am bothered with the admixture of the first "column," and one that appears later. Mostly, I like it very much and feel its flow needs more structural editing. It seems the best parts are spoken sentances but that is the kind of poetry I like.

I've never heard of this person, is there more for comparison? Thank you, Kat, for something out of the blue that has such rich thoughts.

Doug :)


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