Joe, WHAT needs cleanup an consolidation? The lyrics in the DT seem pretty done. It's a reminder mostly to myself, written quickly during the singaround, that we need to have threads consolidated and a definitive version of the lyrics proofread and clearly marked. The thread title says there's a word missing, but I found the original poster is correct. Corrections below. The corrections are very minor, but I see no reason not to have the best transcription we can come up with. -Joe Offer-
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