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CapriUni 'Simply Human' by CapriUni -- chorus question? (17) RE: 'Simply Human' by CapriUni -- chorus question? 16 Mar 12


Yorkshire Yankee --

I like the changes you've made to your song (and to the final chorus)

Thanks. Yeah, the first incarnations of the second and third verses bothered me even as I wrote them the first time 'round. Their undertone was precisely the sort of pity-laden treacle I'm protesting. Likewise with the final chorus; I needed a way to get past the "Us vs. Them" dynamic of What You Do With What You Got.

I'm picky, 'cos I'm a graphic designer!

Ooh! *preen* A compliment from Someone who Knows.

Paul Burke --

Thank you Kindly, Sir.


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