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GUEST,MMario New song by CapriUni: Help w/ tweaking ? (33) RE: New song by CapriUni: Help w/ tweaking ? 15 Jul 05


Hi! Haven't given this the attention it deserves or listened to it yet - but my initial impressions.

yup - there's something "off" about the first verse but I can't figure it out.

My inclination as things are would be to move the first verse and make it the FINAL verse.

The only other thing I saw immediatley is that I think

"Their weight and worth the measure of a friend" might have more impace as "Their weight and worth true measure of a friend"

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