Mudcat Café Message Lyrics & Knowledge Personal Pages Record Shop Auction Links Radio & Media Kids Membership Help
The Mudcat Cafeawe



User Name Thread Name Subject Posted
Gypsy Can someone do me a big favour please? (38) RE: Can someone do me a big favour please? 03 May 05


Silly me, i liked both of them. Only real comments i can make are two: Drop the profanity.....song is powerful, and that just weakens it. And rather than psuedo-fanity, i would go for a descriptive word, like "dirty" , 'filthy" or something along those lines.
Liked the second song equally well.......think alot of people have been there.
Comment number two: try really hard to have a good melody on these. We have loads of singer-songwriters in our neck of the woods, and that seems to be the week link. If it is poetry with music in the background, fine. If it is a song, you should be able to whistle the melody.
Good work!


Post to this Thread -

Back to the Main Forum Page

By clicking on the User Name, you will requery the forum for that user. You will see everything that he or she has posted with that Mudcat name.

By clicking on the Thread Name, you will be sent to the Forum on that thread as if you selected it from the main Mudcat Forum page.

By clicking on the Subject, you will also go to the thread as if you selected it from the original Forum page, but also go directly to that particular message.

By clicking on the Date (Posted), you will dig out every message posted that day.

Try it all, you will see.